Showing posts with label Reflection. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Reflection. Show all posts

Monday, 28 November 2016

Story Board Evaluation


Storyboard Evaluation


What went well? 
The story board went well as we included a detailed set of images of the scene and also added a voice over to it. By doing this it meant that we gave more information as to what is going to happen in the film opening and how each scene will plan out. We attempted to include some of the shot types to make sure they are varied although in many we were unsure as are planing to decide at a later date. it also gave us a good indication towards how long each scene will be to make sure we can make it with in the guidelines of two minutes. 



What could be improved/ work you change next time?
The images of the story board were draw in pencil. This was to make sure if we made any mistakes we were able to quickly change them and stay on task. Although when we videoed these images they were not viably seen, to improve this we should have drawn them in a darker colour so the audience do not struggle to see them. Plus as mentioned earlier, not every scene is given a shot description. This makes the plan seem a little unorganized with is not the idea we want to give off. To improve this a title could be added on just to give the audience more information of whether it will be a match on action, long shot, close up or pan etc. 
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Monday, 31 October 2016

Group Pitch Feedback



Feedback

Clear genre, themes, message?
Drama
Struggles and hard life - try to help people aim high and not be put down.
Crime, drug smuggling, turning life around
forgiveness
Justice


what is the narrative?
Drugs and airport
train
crime and smuggling
What drugs?
first crime even committed
Realistic Storyline.


Interesting character?
the main characters
just close up
Italian characters


The target audience?
Young people
uneducated
teenagers and adults
15+


Institution
low budget
social media (free)
enigma codes
Independent production company.


Any comments about the film, would you watch it, it is doable and interesting?
Yes because it is raw and hard hitting- you want to know what happens.
yes again building intensity essential to build up tension. Close ups so you want to know what he's doing. Concentrate on mise en scene.
Opening scene looks capable of being done at a high standard and realistic.